Comments on: Why my English Sucks!!!??? :-(?

By: Jae

Jae — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 00:59:59 +0000

I have broken up your paragraph into shorter, easy-to-read paragraphs for the web. Also, I’ve corrected a lot of the grammar and thrown in a bit of American slang.

Try this:

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You’ve heard it all.

Everybody out there is trying to convince you that you can earn money in a snap — I’m talking a day or three! But we all know it’s not that easy. Earning anything at all always takes much more work than these companies would have you believe, which can be a huge disappointment.

But we don’t go for all that hype. With us, you will always know exactly where you stand. So believe us when we tell you that with our company, you will get all the tools you need to begin a career in marketing.

But not only that, we provide complete step-by-step on-screen training so that even beginners can learn the basics without a lot of extra research. We can be your one-stop-shop for everything you need to learn marketing.

Read on to find out how…

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Hope this helps, but of course feel free to disregard it all Good luck! And I’d have to say your English is better than my terrible attempts at foreign languages…
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By: Y.S.

Y.S. — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 00:28:59 +0000

We know you have heard it all. Everybody or every company out there tells to join them and you will earn money very easily and without effort, or start earning money in 24 to 72 hours once you join. To be honest, it is not as easy as they make it sound. You will have to do some work daily for about hour or hour an half. Otherwise, you won't learn anything.We know you may feel depressed or disappointed. What we told you is the truth. We do not say lies. Therefore, if you have all the tools you need to start marketing but do not have proper,step by step, live-on-screen training , you will find it hard (especially if your a beginner). It takes a lot of studying and research to learn it on your own. Maybe you will have to pay other marketing training websites to teach you how to market in a correct fashion, and this can take a lot of your time and money...With us, you will not face that trouble. You will discover in the following pages..
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By: ~Hannah~

~Hannah~ — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 23:47:59 +0000

We know you have heard it all. Everybody or every company out there tells you that if you join them, you will earn money very easily with no effort, or start earning money in 24 to 72 hours once you join. To be honest, it is not as trivial as they make it sound, you will have to do some work every day for about hour or hour an half. Otherwise, you will earn nothing. We know you may now feel depressed or disappointed, but what we told you is the truth. We do not give you hype. Therefore, if you get all the tools you need to start marketing and do not have a proper live-on-screen training in step by step, you will find it so hard (especially if you are a beginner) to go through and learn by yourself, because you will need to do a great amount of research, a lot of study and you might have to pay other marketing training websites to teach you how to market in a correct fashion, and this can take alot of your time and money...With us, you will not face that trouble, as you will just discover in the following pages... hope this helped! I did the best I could. =]
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By: ™BUGGZ™

™BUGGZ™ — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 23:40:59 +0000

Your English is better then a lot of Americans on Yahoo Answer(your paragraph that is)
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By: sup?

sup? — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 23:06:59 +0000

from what i've read your english is pretty good, sorry i didn't read the whole thing its a bit long
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